hello everybody!i have been atinding  a privet school whar we do a lot of riting so i have decide to star posting MY papers!


  Sophia McKay
  01/17/12
  WOTS
  Similies & Metaphors, Rough #2


                  Magnificent

Walking into the endless monster, the darkness folded in making me as blind as a bat , turning  on my flash light head set  I notice a crying a trickle of tears winding and weaving its way though the small tunnel. As the tonal crouched , my path forces me to crawl like a caterpillar as slow as molasses until the ceiling of the cave raised its head like a steep mountain. The light on my headset shined like the sun, reflecting off of a pool water. It seems like Diamonds are shimmering  all around me. It was magnificent.

this is not the best paper i have written and its not vary good
but what ever
-sophie